A Random story of an Adventurer

Great story, I was really surprised at how good it is. The description said system and we have a system, it said sport we have the sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!

Sword devil also dual cultivates is an interesting concept given a fantastic execution. An excellent writing style, a lively protagonist, and a beautiful world further amplify the imagery, thus, making it a wonderful take on the genre. The story is fast-paced, keeping readers entertained till the very end. The only reason I didn't give this a perfect five is that the story is still in progress and I expect a lot more coming explaining various plot points. Overall, it is a wonderful story and readers should give this a chance

A decent read, however, the background is way too lacklustre. A lot of locations/organizations/mundane things are never really explained. The first 20~ish chapters are also very bland which makes it hard to want to continue reading.There are also some minor grammar/spelling mistakes.Not a masterpiece but better than 60% of other novels of a similar genre.

very nice, story is good and the characters develop well.i actually enjoyed this a lot more than i thought i would. its about an mmorpg, but it has a small supernatural type feeling.give it a try. you’ll most definitely like it.

I read all the 60 Pre-Released chapters and liked it very much. So I thought why not read it in MTL. And this is my review after completing the novel.This novel has about 1000 chapters out of which I only read about 600 chapters in detail then I just scrolled the Table Of Contents and read the chapters according to the Chapter Title (for various reasons). So although I know the Basic Summary but I don't know in detail what happened between Chapter 600-1000.Now lets discuss about the World Structure, Cultivation Realms, Power Structure.World Structure & Power Structure :- (P.S: I don't know much detail about Power structure because Main Sects appear after Chapter 600) 1. Spirit Continent/Realm (Same Ancient Land where Dragon Emperor asked Lin Han to go for Revenge)This is the main continent of the world in which the story takes place. 3000 years ago after Ice God colluding with Old Man of Time & Space killed Dragon Emperor(secretly), Ancient Dragon Dynasty became chaotic because of mysterious disappearance of Dragon Emperor. Then Ice God came to quell the unrest and after killing many she established her own dynasty which rules the continent, Frost Divine Dynasty.The Continent is divided into five parts namely Eastern, Western, Southern, Northern, Central.2. Lingwu Continent/Domain/Island (MC's Continent)There are countless islands floating in the endless sea around Spirit Continent. They are called Domains. Lingwu Domain is just one of the domain out of countless others.It falls under the control of Shenwu Qianzhuang, which is a major power of Eastern Wasteland (one of the five sectors of Spirit Realm). There are many Shenwu Academies (branch of Shenwu Qianzhuang) on the Domain through which qualified disciples can go to Shenwu Qianzhuang.Just like Spirit Realm, Lingwu Domain is also divided into 5 sectors, Eastern, Western, Southern, Northern & Central.3. Southern Sector of Lingwu Domain (MC's Sector)The Southern Region has 17 states, and Xuezhou is the smallest of the 17 states.4. Xuezhou State (MC's State)There are hundreds of millions of territories in the State, and the Dajin Empire is located in the center of Xuezhou.5. Dajin Empire (MC's Empire)The most powerful overlord power in the Empire are called "One Sect, Two Palaces, and Three Halls" by the world."One Sect" refers to Qiankun Jianzong(MC joins this sect)."Two Palaces" refers to the Divine Phoenix Heaven Palace(Lin Ruyan's Mother is from this place) and the Nine Nether Magic Palace."Three Halls" refers to the Hall of Lord Zun, the Hall of Warlords and the Hall of Corpse Yan.Dajin Empire controls many territories one of which is Yan Kingdom and Tianhou Kingdom/Empire.6. Tianhou Kingdom/Empire(MC joins a sect in here according to his master's wish) Most Powerful one is The Royal Family. Except for The Royal Family there are 4 other sects. 4 ancestors of these sect has to fight together to be on equal ground with The Emperor.The sects are Tian Jianmen (MC's sect), Iron Sect, Tianqin Valley(It's Valley Master is Lin Ruyan's Father), True Demon Sect.7. Yan Kingdom (MC's Kingdom)It's the Kingdom from where MC is. In this kingdom Chiyang King(MC's Master) is the most powerful man even more powerful than The Emperor.MC is from the southern most border village named Changyun Village's Lin Family which is a branch of Broken Sky City Lin Family.Cultivation Base:- (P.S: I don't know cultivation base mentioned after chapter 600)1) Martial Realm    1.1) 9 sub-realms (each divided into Initial, Intermediate, Late, Peak)2) True Martial Realm     2.1) 2 sub-realms namely Earth & Sky (each divided into Initial,              Intermediate, Late, Peak)3) Spiritual Martial Realm     3.1) 3 sub-realms namely Spiritual Realm, Spiritual Wheel Realm,              Soul Realm     3.2) Sub-realms are further divided into 9 realms4) Dongtian Realm(9 sub-realms) 5) Supernatural / Magical Realm     5.1) 4 sub-realms namely Linghai, Jingu, Sixiang, Hualong     5.2) Sub-realms are further divided into 9 heavens 6) *Holy Realm (Yin-Yang Holy Realm, Nirvana Holy Realm) Till chapter 600 MC didn't even touch this realm so I don't know much about this realm and after it.Now let's talk about Plot development. 1. MC was a trash who was stuck at 1st Heaven of Martial Realm for One Whole Year but after getting Art of Ancient Dragon Emperor, he was able to brakethrough Dongtian Realm within 2.5 Years.Remember, MC didn't inherit Dragon Emperor's Memory or Experience. He only got a Dragon Soul(which increased his Soul cultivation & comprehension talent) and a Cultivation Art. So MC's cultivation talent is still trash.2. No Bottleneck Exist for MC. As long as there is enough Spirit Stones MC can breakthrough Continuously. No need to care about Solid Foundation. Withing 9 months, MC brokethrough True Martial Earth Realm(newly advanced) to Spiritual Wheel Realm(got into Rank 76 of Top 100).3. Nothing Challenging. MC can fight above his level and most villains are within his fighting range. And those scare ones who aren't, they can't attack MC due to various reasons. And when they finally attack, they are way below MC's Combat Power.4. There will be few times when you will think that the complete scenario is very forced.5. He finally sleeps with Lin Ruyan in Chapter 324 but tells her that He will marry her after reaching Peak of Martial Arts. As for other Females, MC has no romance with them(until chapter 600. after that I don't know).6. Finally the Shitty Finale. You Can be the judge of that.  Just read these two with Google Translate.CH 998 :- https://***.uukanshu.com/b/68245/90594.html (This is The Chapter Previous to Finale)Finale:- https://***.uukanshu.com/b/68245/91407.htmlAfter reading these two you will understand that YOU SHOULD NOT PUT THIS NOVEL ON YOUR LONG TERM READING LIST.Thank You.

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Not a fan to these kinda but not I cane across this particular one and I must say it's worth reading. just came across some typos and a little editing would do.

I like the characters, they seem nice and interesting and the contrast in peraonalities is fun. Such as when the cashied doesn’t get to clock out and she assumes the universe hates her. The story so far (only 4 chapters) is funny and enjoyable. However, honestly I think the romance is progressing too quickly, and if someone’s going through a hard time it’s less realistic to spill it straight away, you also wouldn’t immediatley gush over someone after being cheated on? Constructive critisism: -most romance novels are better when the romance is at a slower more natural pace, if it’s too fast paced it may seem forced. -Also, for how she spilt her “backstory” of sorts to him, it’d be more realistic if you’d:1. Had her go in either slightly drunk causing her to spill, like she’d gone bar hopping and came here for a drink to clear her head to figure out what to do. 2. Had her go in distraught, him being attracted to her but not liking her yet, offers her a drink since “drinks help you drown your sorrow” and she lets her “backstory” loose after getting a bit tipsy.