180 Days In My Ex's College

'No, I'm on a brief pause. I just received a call from Aisha and I think there's a little problem.'

    "Oppa, tubuhmu panas sekali." Joon Young hanya tersenyum padanya.

"Sir, I think I found a way, actually it's Ms Hermione's idea," Micasa said with excitement.

The black space, what I can only describe as a ball to this day, floated towards me and into my chest. The worst pain I had ever felt had taken me. I doubled over in pain, hands over my rapidly beating heart. I pushed my forehead as hard into the solid nothingness where the board sat. My shoes scuffed and screeched as they ran and pushed into what was previously a floor. I wanted to scream as tears now streamed from my eyes, to take my heart and hold it to stop the beating, to do anything to take my mind off this pain. I could hear these words in my head: "If you manage to survive the trials life has in store for you, then we shall think secondly on what you have suffered today. If you don't survive, then you lose. This game was just one of many that you will fave. You will wake once your mind and body have healed from this predicament, but your life will never be the same again. The real game will begin once you wake. We bid thee farewell." I bolted up as my back arched, this feeling of a thousand needles forcing themselves into my spine. I opened my mouth and let loose a silent, wordless screech for help. I collapsed and hit my head on something solid. My ears rung with a high pitched tone and my body cramped, pulling in on itself as I went silently.

"Ma," I hoped. Sa tagal kong hinintay ang pagkakataong ito ay ngayon lang ako nakaramdam ng pag-asa.

I turn quickly in the direction of the voice and find that it is Robin ... the thing is that I am sitting on her legs while I drop my body on her chest ... that explains the two pillows on my shoulders, I want to get rid of , but my body exhausted by the previous fight and without mana, does not respond completely apart from being held by her.

I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.

Alright where do I start, First if you haven't already started reading, what are you doing here go read now. But on a more serious note lets go down the list.What is the story about, Well I don't think I need to tell you, you've read the synopsis.Now Writing Quality, I at the time of writing this have read up to Chapter 43, And haven't seen any big errors that break immersion or anything like that.For the stability of Updates, I believe the author has released a chapter almost everyday since starting the book and has taken only a few breaks (I think)Now for the last three. Story development, the story itself is still in the earlier stages (I believe) So there is still more to come so no perfect 5 stars.This is some what the same for Character Design & development and World background. For Character Design & development as the story is still earlier on there is still a lot we don't know about each character (which is normal) But based off of these 43 chapters in my opinion Patrick Enenra (that last name is a pain to spell) is the most flesh out character (and my favorite now)And finally the world background which is still somewhat of a mystery that will be revealed as the story goes, so go read it to find out yourself.overall a 4.4 for me as of chapter 43 (but most likely a five start once the story progress more) Fully Recommend.

I really really like this book till now and man smut is awesome in this one no jokes

Not bad, but a bit of a very sleepy read.

It’s my first time being interested in an unrated story, so I will give it my first ever review, I think it deserves it.I have been lurking on this new story for the last 2 days and I am glad I did so far. The first few chapters were slow in pace but the interactions between characters and the world building kept me around. But by chapter 4-5 it really did it for me, the tension, the pace and the few mysteries here and there made me want to see how this story will turn out.Good: Author’s world seems really original and interesting. I do like my system action stories, but it’s refreshing to have something else at times. I also like MC and his background, his actions and emotions feel right and appropriate to his age. I also like that the other characters also got a clear identity and voice. Bad: The writing at times got some weakness that made a few chapters long to read. I would recommend to get more to the point when it comes to describing actions and feelings. Webnovels isn’t for slow readers. But the last two chapters (12-13) really give me hope that author will get better and better.That’s all, wishing author and this story the best!