17 Guyz

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The black knight enters

Suiiiii~~

Keep hands and fighter jets away from the armored dude

Hah... even one of Zora's loyalists knows she's gone insane.

After a few stumble in the beginning the operation is getting back into place, Vlad still is a problem, but I doubt he can fight so many choujin at the same time... but he will still take some heads if they aren't careful, if I understood his power right he is suitable to fights of one vs many.

Frozen Jelly as a murder weapon and eaten? Let's not even, talk about Frozen Jelly causing blunt force trauma and focus on the fact someone freezes a jelly hard enough to not break while bashing a guy's head. Even a clay pot breaks if you bash it into someone's head how hard is that fucking jelly?

I guess the same could be said of Oritsue and his interactions with the captured human girls, particularly because they didn't feel like characters at all, just puppets to get the author's point across, but a big part of that seems to be the pacing.

The biggest gripe I have though are the rants to defend his viewpoints (which are presented as Taura's and is a cheap tactic). Yes they're afterwords and don't need to be read, but they heavily rely on reductive and straw-men arguments that, even if not wrong, are facile and in bad taste. If you have to continually go back and defend your own work, especially using straw-men, it shows a lack of confidence in your own work.

2/3

I can agree with this, but watching them all grow up may be rewarding too lol.