Babe I love it so much I'm going to read all right chapters right now...what? OMG 😫this is good dark shiiiiii oh my God that synopsis 😫ugh yes .

I have read it to chapter 15 and it is so damn interesting and i love the intense battle

it's been s great read with the story unraveling more of itself with each chapter read. The thoughts of the Mc and his turmoil are overall progressive .

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

it has a lot of chapter and they will be coming at a fast pace.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,

Let’s go I’ve been looking for a good American football novel on here and this is showing genuine promise

Good starting ,let's see where this story goes....keep it up

Ngl I really expected this story to be a cliche romance story where the fl and ml have an enemies to lovers trope but didn't expect it to be this addicting. Yes, addicting. While the story is still an enemies to lovers one, what I'm loving about this story is that despite having a fixed trope, it also delves deep into the other factions of the story, like important roles played by other characters and so on. It gets locked on a but early, but the first nine chapters were enough for me to get hooked enough to know more. Great job author! Please update!

Very captivating and interesting story, I highly recommend for those that love fast paced storytelling. Kudos to the author 👌

love this book. A tale of an obsession for their mothers love and getting through their trial and tribulations. it displayed just how much the love of a mother makes a difference to one's life. for tragic ending to devlop to a happy ending is always a blessing. thanks for the read.

The idea of the story is good. Though there are some inconsistent wordings, like silver sigil then silver shards, as well as the dating of events. the first few chapterr started with August 11 to 13, then after the MC's outside adventure, the next day was dated as august 11 again. At first, I thought it was double posted, but then the Second August 11 was stated as the 2nd week of college.

I am loving the story so far especially certain abilities of the main character. i am very interested in seeing where this story goes. The main character should have probably been inherently evil based on their origin but don't come across that way to me and i especially like that.