I am the author. I would have rated this 100 starts if I could, Why?Because I love Yanderes, especially the femdom, obsessive and possessive types and not really the school days type (If u know wut I mean). I hope this novel finds it right audience. I am using Ai to proofread my chapters if you don't mind. English is not my first language, and also I do not want my novel to have a subpar quality, I hope you understand.

Dual Vintaskii is a thrilling story, recommended for readers not below 15😊

Although have just started, I think the future is promising!It is captivating and the style meets the story. The protag's resilience is something that sparkles.Highly recommended!!

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Alright, I’m 11 chapters in and the author asked for reviews, so here goes. There is minor problems with spelling so far, with the first few chapters being almost perfect, but the last few having one or two words misspelled. Nothing major, but I have noticed that readers have pointed them out in the paragraph comments, some as old as a week ago, and they are still there. So room for improvement, but better than 90% of WebNovel books. 8.5/10.Not going to say much for update stability, since it is currently a newer book and chapters are released consistently (for now). 10/10.The story, while compelling, hasn’t gripped me yet. (Minor spoilers) I don’t really care about his ex girlfriend or his arch enemy, and outside of the book being from the MC’s perspective, I can’t find myself rooting for him at the moment. There isn’t anything making me want him to win. Again, it’s early days (chapter 11) but I’m not immediately gripped into the storytelling, at least from a character perspective. 6/10.As with above, the characters have not been fantastic yet. I’m cautiously optimistic, but for now, they are merely outlines in a sketchbook, sans colour or flair. 5/10.The world is where I give this book brownie points. The author has pulled me in to this story almost purely on the back of worldbuilding. Giving me just enough to be interested, without making the next 5 chalters be purely info dumping. Room for improvement, and if I was the author I would be careful about power creep (a couple items and abilities already have the dreaded 200% or 300% bonuses), but I’m a sucker for a good VRMMORPG story. 9/10.I am going to continue reading, and I will try to update this review as I go, but I’ll probably forget. If anyone is interested in my updated opinion, hit this review up with a comment and I’ll see it then.TL:DR pretty good, minor improvements needed. 7.5/10 or a solid B.

OMG, this book is Lit! I devoured it in one sitting!The superhero action is insane and the characters are so relatable.I'm low-key obsessed! can't wait for the next one!!

though am not fan of system books but am enjoying your book, it's very interesting just completed second chapter

OMG! My pick for perfect couple is Zoey and Alex! Not bossy pants Lily, who thinks the whole world revolves around her. Zoey is my pick and nice stability of updates [i.e. 4 chapters a day]

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

What a family ruby has. What has she done to deserve such cruelty?? and I’m definitely here for the revenge on her family. I can’t wait.

Good novel if you like OP MC and are looking for a light read that make you feel good and if you like harem.                                               

Is there the author still keep writing and updating ?