Really fun read, have to go to school tmr but i can't stop reading.

I haven't found anything to disprove the quality of this book. It's soo much fun to read. Highly recommend

I enjoyed every bit of it,and I must confess, rosella is a good writer🥺take your flowers🌹🌹

How should I put it? In terms of writing, it’s quite excellent. The setting and themes are well thought out, and the character designs are also strong. While it might not bring every character to life, at least the Sword Pavilion Master, the Eldest Senior Sister, and the bearded guy are quite vividly portrayed. However, the logical flow of the plot is a bit harder to evaluate.In the early stages, the protagonist’s various experiences—like the protective charm saving his life or the thunder talisman blowing up the wolf demon—could have been better understood if he had just put a little more thought into it. Even if he didn’t fully grasp the situation, he could have at least had some clues, and with a bit more time, he might have figured it out. Even outsiders, upon first meeting the protagonist, could piece together the cause and effect of events within a short time. As someone who holds a cheat ability, he keeps thinking he’s some kind of “tumor superman.” But it seems his mind might be a bit off—if we categorize him as intellectually challenged, then his mindless behavior isn’t entirely incomprehensible. Additionally, the transition from the protagonist’s ignorance to understanding the truth of the events isn’t handled very well.

Since author said not to read, am not gonna read.   

Hey everyone! It’s the Shameless author here, and I’m giving myself a little 5-star rating for this novel.😊 Writing this novel has been such an exciting experience so far, and I’m thrilled to be able to share it with all of you! But don’t worry—I’m not just here to brag. I’d love to hear your thoughts! Did you enjoy the chapter? What stood out to you? What didn’t quite work? Your feedback is so important to me and helps me grow as a writer. Thanks so much for joining me on this adventure.

Hello! I am Tigr4!This is my first original story and the second one I've posted, with the first being a fanfiction.I won’t talk about my first work posted because it was quite disappointing, and I made a lot of mistakes with it.But this one is different… I think.Here are some things you can expect from this story:First: A reasonably decent romance, I believe, and fun to read.Second: A character with a mindset very different from typical Xianxia protagonists. He’s not obsessed with perfection at every step, and as strange as it sounds, it actually makes sense.Every Xianxia protagonist seems obsessed with achieving perfection, often making their journey much harder than if they were simply "normal."Why face 500 million celestial tribulation lightning bolts when the usual is just 9? All for a power that supposedly allows fighting between realms, yet in the final stages of cultivation, perfection often doesn't make much of a difference, and, most of the time, they can barely defeat someone just a few levels above them within the same realm.The fact is, as surprising as it may seem, they pursue this perfection and nearly die countless times for it. And what’s the ultimate goal? Immortality! They almost kill themselves repeatedly, relying on "plot armor" just to survive the disasters they themselves cause in the pursuit of immortality.Typical features of perfection in Xianxia stories: fighting between realms, and a slow, problematic level-up progression compared to what the MCs should reach.My MC will only pursue "near-perfection," fight between realms, and have a much faster level-up progression.Third: What kind of second was that? Is this crazy author insane?!Fourth: In the first 5 chapters, I messed up the word count, and they ended up being short. I made the following chapters much longer, and by chapter 12, they already exceeded 15,000 words. The average now is 1,500 words or more, excluding the first few chapters.Fifth: There is no fifth point.Sixth: Leave some Power Stones and happy comments, don’t disrespect me, or I’ll cry!Seventh: In the first 13 chapters, the MC is quite lonely. Personally, I like the story more from chapter 14 onwards.Eighth: Eighth.Ninth: Oh, I just remembered now that this is a list of what to expect...

A good fast-paced story of Helena and Romeo. My heart flutters whenever Romeo gets jealous. I’m all in for their juicy banter. Keep up the great work Author (^,^)/

The story was smooth and intriguing straight from the introduction, nothing seems forced imho as of now. My only complaint is there's so little chapters as of now, I knew I should have saved a bit more, highly recommend it

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥

Plea  choose this book, it’s really a different plot thn I hv red before. Can’t  wait to see how the story will unfold

This novel is good enough though i have read better. But as a beginner writer his writing is worth the appreciation. You have to remove the unnecessary chats and be straightforward to an extend. Still waiting for the next chapters to come