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Great start, well pacing, and the world building was very good. Your story has a great potential in the market, don't give up, author keep going! Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Intresting story line something I would like to to read more chapters waiting for new characters and new more exciting abilities to be shown

I’m already on Chapter 5, and I wanted to leave a review!This is my first time reading a story about cultivation with a Chinese theme/characters, and I’m really enjoying it so far.The pacing of each chapter is great, and the character/world-building is well done and interesting. I just have a bit of trouble understanding some of the details about the power system. Hehehe, maybe I’m just a bit slow, sorry! :VSo if you’re planning to read this story, I’m sure you’ll enjoy it! If you’re into cultivation and transmigration stories, you must give this one a try!

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reviewing for the fp. It seems like  an interesting setup.

Imteresting setup and realistic MC. She is not omnipotent from the start. Hope is a nice addition and hopefuly she will have more screen time in the future.

Thanks for all your support, It's my first book and welcomed all the thoughts and reviews! Believe me the book will be interesting cause I put my work on it, it will finally take Tang Lei from a noob to a king, Every players now in the NBA will be in my book. Let me know your favorite NBA player!

usually, I start reading when a book has more chapters but the synopsis seemed interesting. I gotta say I regret reading this book while it was still early because it just left me wanting and waiting for more chapters. It is honestly a really good book with an amazing world and setting, plus some riveting action to boot. I only have one nitpick, and it's  the use of cuse alternatives. It's not even a real critique, but I personally prefer if a character would curse, seldom curse, or not curse at all. However, not once does the curse alternatives take me out of the story too much so I'm fine either way.

After 9 chapters, this story is going nowhere, I am not invested in any of the characters.

I enjoy this novel as there haven't been many that go about gaining power this way. I would like to think the author doesn't drop this. I've been away for some time hoping this would build up to have over 100 chapters but it only gain 20 or so.