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CarlGagnon
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i skipped chapter 26 by accident so sorry
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absolutely amazing š I love your work .
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Absolute cinema of a web novel. If you haven't read this but you're reading this review then wth are you doing, start reading this.
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Imma need new chapter this instant bruv can't wait !!!!! And these feral novels getting out of hand . This story Definitely needs a female lol i am hoping the girl from bus? But don't know fssss
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"I'm curious and looking forward to the next part!"
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It's beautiful. I hope you can visit with me
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Achmed Iām happy your doing your thang but you gotta stay consistent my dude I canāt keep up!!! Love your work tho.
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I really love this novel š. The author has created the world background and the character design to have such a unique quality to them that I usually find myself disappointed when I get to the end of the chapters. The only thing that I would love the author to get better at would be the consistency of the chapter updates. Aside from that, I believe that the author is doing a really good job with this novel.
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Common Author! Let's continue the story, please
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it is a good book i highly recommend to all
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The world building and story line may be good, but what i call BS is at start MC starts reading the books so he should know everything, and now chapter 80 or something there is book or legend he doesnt know? nope, denied.
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Before we get to the main part of my review, hereās the cliff notes:You should definitely read this story, itās so good! The characters are dynamic and lovable. The world is well thought out and developed. The action is balanced out nicely with some lightheartedness and the system isnāt overbearing. (The story can also be strangely educational at times) There, now for the heart of the review. The characters are dynamic and a lot of fun to read about. While Rex doesnāt really have much of a friend group to begin with itās quick to develop and itās fun watching the people around him slowly being drawn in. Whether that be as friends, friendly and not so friendly rivals, or enemies. I appreciate the range of characters. Itās not just the main character, the best friend, and the love interest. The side characters arenāt forgotten about either and we get interactions with them as well. They each have personality and I canāt help but look forward to seeing more in the future. The world itself is well developed and unique. Well, as unique as any story taking place in the modern world, but with magic and monsters. Not to down grade this in any way. You donāt find a lot of stories that take a more military approach to these things. The author has done a good job at fleshing out the dynamics of a military base and how that would operate in a world with super powered people. From who would join, how they would recruit people to even the funding and political powers. These are all presented in an easy to digest manner, naturally given to the reader without an overbearing info dump. This novel also has a good balance between action and drama. I caught myself laughing at the end of ch 47 from the sudden switch from military espionage to school drama. It was a smooth switch and felt appropriate for the moment, but still had me laughing. Every author has a different way to balance these things, different ratios between the different aspects of a story, and a lot of it just comes down to personal preference. In my opinion this story has a great balance. We have a slightly heavier focus on the training and action, but the social aspect isnāt overlooked and it definitely isnāt inconsequential either.Finally Iāll go over the system. As someone who has been burnt out on the system troupe, I find this to be one of the better ones. Often times systems are repetitive and predictable, a lazy manās way to move a story forward. Rex on the other hand, has actual interactions with people that promote the story. His growth and the information he gathers mainly come from his actions and interactions with the people around him, not from a system. The system itself seems to be used more as a guide, a basic system function without extra bells and whistles. Rexās abilities donāt seem to be tied to the system either. While they are earned through leveling up and the like, itās not like he has to use the system to use his abilities, they are a part of him. The system simply displays and explains it doesnāt enable. Heās not running around calling out his special move or looking at a shop purchasing abilities. I appreciate this approach to a system, itās not heavy handed. It adds to the story and doesnāt take anything away. Of course Iāll always be a little bit apprehensive, but so far so good. A quick side note is the type of system, the Werepanther System. Being a werepanther isnāt strictly flavor for the story. There are actual changes Rex experiences that arenāt just for show. With his strength there is weakness. A promise of potential consequences and I look forward to seeing more. Over all the story is good! Definitely give it a read. I donāt go around writing reviews just for fun š
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