I love the story so far. It's a great read and love the chemistry of characters. Dialogues and prompts are well written, keep me hooks to the end of the chapter. Plus, the banters are too good which made me laugh. Great work, author 😀

Nice bhai story toh mast he par a little improvement is still needed.Baki yaad rakh yah pe kabhi bhi dal early excess mujhe mil jana chahiye varna dekh le.

Wouldn’t recommend. MC lacks depth and world building is close to non-existent. MC gets thrown into action fairly quickly and the readers are stuck wondering what’s what and how it happened. What’s the Veil? What’s the Ashlands ? Why’d he get infected ? Since when was that a thing ? What happens to their original bodies?Other than being an outskirt rat what’s his background? How is life like for everyone since the veil appeared ? Nothing gets an explanation. You have to accept it as is and move on lol. Made it to chapter 15 and I was being generous.

Has a lot of potential, just read it again and tbh i’m really hyped to see how the story continues, Zero is probably the character i’m interested the most, hope he isn’t just a random villain and gets forgotten in the first 3 chapters😭

Now this is a whole new world you have taken us into, but am so loving it 🥰 iIlove the world you created and this system hoo God i you everything 😘 keep up my dear author 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 waiting for more and more

overall the story is too good and I would prefer as a fan to get the updates sooner and u are good at this, keep going the work is awesome 💗🤌

Hello shameless author here, i want to say thank you to those supporting my book and also I appreciate the corrections.☺️☺️😍🙏 please drop your honest reviews after reading .

Well look good. Have not seen much world building yet in novel. Update daily I like reading non human litrpg novel. So continue writing the novel.

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

pardon my bluntness but no R-18 I don't mean Too much but the should be at least intimacy between them if you get what I mean .

I like the concept of having something like rewind. The writer is experienced and has kept his other novel ongoing. It's still too early to know everything about the story and how he will develop it. But I love it and will update my review. He has got my attention, now I will have to see, for how long...

Best book in this genre I've read on webnovel so far. The first chapter is very hooking and was what prompted me to read it further. I can wait to see what happens next. Currently on chapter ten and I'm sooo excited, can't wait to see what happens next. Please read, you won't regret it!