i like the story , it's really interesting but i think you can develop more Akira

This is really good, I went in thinking the Invulnerability was overstated as they usually do in Chinese novels, but no, guy is truly invulnerable, like, without limit, no matter the rank difference, you can't do shit to this guy. And the MC really cares about looking badass, I love it. Halberds are the best. I also like that he is not a transmigrator, that means he is just a teenager with invulnerability, and it works.

This is a very well-written story. It starts slow but never breaks my immersion in the first chapters, which led me to read until C13. I'll be back later for the fluff Ezra and Oberyn bring ;) Keep up the great work, Author  (*u*)/

The story is getting better and better.  The story plots is quite interesting and fulfilling.  The Male Lead character should be more strong and interesting.  The Female Lead character is okay but a bit unreasonable.  I am looking towards the improvement of the story line and characters building.

coool writing style, I like the way the female lead interacts in the Past. A lost gen z in the year 18's 😂

Amazing 😍😍 and interesting highly recommend

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I really like the story, but the updating stability is so poor with some grammar mistakes.Btw, enjoyed the character of zain so far, poor guy

I love this book and I do not say that very often. This writer has amazing control over world building, character development, and the romance is nice and believable. I cannot say that for many on this platform and needless to say, this book was a breathe of fresh air. 5 stars and I highly recommend anyone to read this.

I like the dark tone, and how Mc has a sense of responsibility😎 although he seems to forget his parents too fast.You can work on the first chapter, somethings are hard to follow

It seems good so far there are a few words that are not understood I think it is because of the translation everything is fine ❤️❤️

Captivating start and rather unique idea.. . I think I might've just found a hidden gem