It's quite good anyway. Keep it up I'll be checking your next chapter upload.

please continue this story is really great please continue

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Really enjoying the novel so far, i really like the lead character.the world building is amazing, definitely worth reading

Magnificent ✨ Please keep on going! ✨✨✨✨

As the trend of first person point of view rises, only few books actually succeed in doing this. This book is truly one of those. There are no awkward moments in the descriptions and the way the story flows. Each word is carefully chosen to craft this page-turning masterpiece. I always recommend Sunny's writing but this one is particularly enticing with both the FL/ML interaction and the rich backgrounds of characters as they add to the story at every turn. In the FL's relationships, there's a tender warmth than you can feel in your heart as you read. When she interacts and responds to the world around her, those feelings become yours as well. Speaking of the FL, she is a badas* who refuses to be a doormat and I think we deserve more FL's out there like this. Despite her being in a position under the cold CEO, I think she counters him well and isn't spineless. However, the mysterious man also makes me want to know more. I already know the big reveals throughout the story will come at the perfect time and be done so beautifully.I can't wait to learn more about the world being created in this novel. Good luck, author!! This one deserves all the praise

Pretty good not gonna lie. Hope the author keeps up the good work. Wish you the best author

while it seems promising I hope the author keeps updating the novel , some of his other nobles are dropped maybe other than the mind control one , or maybe he's just thinking about what write ✍️

a really amazing book. it has great pacing and the characters are amazing. I can't get enough of it, especially how the kid will grow. 10/10

Hi fellow newbie!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up!Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions!Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best, IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

I’ve enjoyed the story so far and hope the author keeps up with it! There are some things I didn’t like in the story like the part where the mc makes a technique that can help someone ascend even though he’s only at the body building realm. Seemed too forced for the mc’s current skill level and understanding of cultivation.

Oh my goodness🥺 I feel so sorry for her already but I love that she’s relentless amidst it all💪 💪