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Govind3780
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I AM INVESTING IN THIS YOU BETTER NOT DISAPPOINT I EXPECT 300+ CHAPTERS DO NOT DISAPPOINT ME
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Unashamed author here :)Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!- "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about a guy named Kaido who accidentally went back in time to his previous self-body. Trying to correct and change things that once happened from occurring again from going the way it did before- "What type of guy is Kaido?" He is a cynical, easily angry man with a overall hatred for the world on life. But! He has a sense of humor and a strong desire to not only survive but also thrive in this world. You'll like him, I promise.- "Will he be overpowered?" No. He will certainly become powerful, but not powerful enough kill and clear every obstacle in his way like a God or something.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but a slow one.-When I mean romance I'm not saying Harem please note.- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one/two chapter every day. The amount may increase, it depends on a lot of factors. Like my schooling and Work- And, finally... "Aren't you too full of yourself? You rated your book almost five stars!" What can I say, It's the best book have ever written, "ooh wait it's my only book here" Yes, it's my only book and still my best one. If you don't believe me do well to check it out.Mentor ; Guilitythree.
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Amazing š and interesting I just love everything about this novel chapter one already got me hooked in highly recommend can't wait for more updates to come
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a very well written story you gonna love n hate Liam on how manipulative he is but the same time be amaze in his devotion of love towards Lea
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I am really liking this novel .. character building is quite strong ..world buildup is good need more focus... I recommend it fully ..š
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A Message to My ReadersI appreciate you taking the time to step into my world. As you read, I hope you find comfort, a bit of inspiration, or simply a pleasant escape from your routine. This story is a gentle invitation to pause and enjoy the simple beauty of a well-told tale.Your thoughts and feelings as you journey through these pages are important to me, and I welcome them wholeheartedly. Here's to a story that grows with every shared smile and quiet moment of reflection.Warmly,JustABoy
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So then, let's begin with my own EXTREMELY OBJECTIVE analysis.Objectively speaking, my book is, of course, the best. No one will ever write a better one. Clear as day.Jokes aside, here's my assessment:Characters:Not bad, but far from good enough. The emotions are somewhat lacking, and a unique way of speaking would improve them.On the positive side, they have their own personalities and donāt just revolve around the MC.Worldbuilding:Iām proud of this. It becomes clearer as the story progressesāmaybe in Volume 2 or 3. But Iāve put an incredible amount of effort into it.Story:Itās not bad, but it could have been developed a bit more.Overall, I think Iāve done a good job, but not a great one.Thereās still a lot of room for improvement.By the way, itās a rather slow-paced novel.If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me!
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He killed the protagonist because he couldn't find another way. He became very sigma mastermind. He is now cookingš
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Awesome! Keep it up.
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Characters building is just š I like the way writer is continuing the story of the supporting characters as well and it makes the story interesting because when story revolves around the main characters, the reading is getting boring.
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Read first 40 chapters and found it very interesting but author had just been uploading for 1 month so I am stacking until he uploads more than 300 chapters. Hope author doesn't drop this novel really liked it and also upload atleast 3 chapter per day hopefully 4 but will make do with 3
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Good story but could be better but the mc is not using his power like the fact that he can gain one skill per day or do to the other dimension he have to see if everything is good or the fact why stop him to create other race why it the situation that create race and him who think what he donāt have and maybe see if he can do other thing whith his system and literally the fact that he know an oracle but guy donāt use it NOOOOO he just skip it there is too much too speak but I think you understand now Author I like the concept but your mc donāt use it he is passive
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