a mother's love is very special. this is a story to read! Worth it!

Hope author sees this- keep this book smutty- please

I'd like the way you write the first chapter how everyone he live turned their backs on him because of his defective stats as a royal truly shows how a person holding power would do if they see someone who is not even worth noticing

Hey there! Loved it. Awaiting the Trails of Honor! This is a grounded, character-driven story that throws you into a world where survival isn’t guaranteed, and neither is victory. No overpowered protagonists, no convenient plot armor,just grit, strategy, and the weight of every decision.The writing is smooth, the pacing keeps you hooked, and the world feels lived-in. The characters? They’re not saints, but they’re not mustache-twirling villains either. They make mistakes, they struggle, and that’s what makes them compelling.If there’s one area for improvement, it would be pacing in certain sections,sometimes, a bit more introspection on world detail could enhance the immersion. Some conflicts resolve quickly, and letting them breathe a little more could add extra impact.Overall, Beneath No Banner is a solid, engaging read, well-written, and refreshingly grounded. If you like stories where brains matter as much as brawn, this one’s worth your time

Hook 🪝, line & sinker . Now could you update the book 📖

The story doesn’t actually start progressing until chapter 47. It’s such filler chapter in the guise of “building up the MC’s villainess personality.” I don’t recommend reading this book as it just seems like a waste of vouchers or stones if this is how the author will delay the story plot in order to gain more money. Can’t imagine as time goes on, how many filler chapters there will be.

Love the concept. Needs more work on the characters though. And it needs to have some sort of pacing. The City being thrown into a Gate seems a little sudden to me as I haven't even learn what the world is about.But other than that. It's good!

I really recommend your writing author!!!

This story is promising. Aside from the rushed plotline at first few chapters, and some gramatical errors (as long as I can read and undertsand -boe from reading translations-it's forgiveable for now) it was to me a decent read. It's an interetsing plot considering this assasin trope has a different twist.The first few chapters need improvements, there's too many things going on. However, once you passed chapter 6, things paced better. Characters now have a slightly better depth. Storyline are not rushed anymore. Overall, this one is a keeper for now. Keep improving and keep the story going! I'd like to see how it goes in the end.

Very good so far, look forward to reading more.

The story is actually a lot better than I had expected. There’s a ton of 18+ scenes, who’s is good for me, but it’s skippable and doesn’t take up multiple chapters which is also good. Plot is A1 so far. I hope the author doesn’t drop this one, it’s super good.

This is a new blend of Superheroes & System novel markets. It'll keep you hooked till the end. But one of the reviews does really point out the novel which was bugging me. I believe in author could further improve since he'd also written a lot of works previously. 😁