Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Hello. I'm the author and i want to drop a review on my book. so this is my first book ever . There might be problems but I'm trying to become better. I think the quality of my chapters are still improving . let's see where it goes

It's the most Thrilling novel I read so far in a while.keep it up author.i just started but looks promising.

The story was okay till chapter 80, but it just became the cliche ones right after, the MC who can't beat the people of his class yet cuz he's behind in actually experience and technique but they make mistakes like not taking him serious (ren 2nd rank lost against one attack) the two girls fighting each other or have the time to talk shit to each other when against a demon who pooped out of nowhere? and him getting a boost from nowhere like always? his gift let their power stabilize but what powers? like you can just give your mana to someone? no explanation on that either is up to the readers imagination, also WTH is with him making people believe in his words? or making people do what he wants? or him treating them as a chess piece? there was no such action literally a child asking for things and they happened cuz he knew about the future. it's worth 3.0 in my opinion no more than that. there is high IQ plays or plot here just magic and swords.

Really good also using Sonia to read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This is almost a copy of another novel I saw named “ Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System“ it even starts at a university.

For those looking for fantasy and adventure and would like a break from the usual tropes, you might want to give this book a chance :)

truly enjoying this book.. author please keep going

First time im writing a review about a novel so i will be honest. The ideia behind the novel is good, but the author makes no sense of it, no world building, no explanations of how things came to be, no nothing. He forgets abouts the things says in chapters like,1 example: MC(rank F) acts like a allmighty being against a B rank and challenges him to a fight in due a week?(1 month? dont really remember) then 3 to 4 chapters says that he has to "play low" (in a área wihlth ONLY F and E ranks) so that he doenst get in trouble like "stupids mcs" from others novels. Like wtf, did you forget about what you wrote in before!?!?!?!?....And guess what he did yes, because its been weeks and zero mention about the fight.2 example: When MC entered the new zone with the new base there was a mention of an horde that would "challenge" the lords of the new zone in 10 days and once again the author totally forgot about that. There are so many more like this ones that its just sad. Im not telling you to give up on writing, but try to remake and improve before continuing to progressing the novel.Keep the consistency of his power.. If he can summon 20 skeletons in the new area everyday then in the chapter 95 he should have something like 200 skeletons( half at  least F+) , or something like 20 E+/D and in the latest chapts author says he can already summon 60 skeletons a day(its been a while already so dont really remember) so MC should have an army of skeletons and you cant use the excuse of "sacrificing" them for power forever. You say one thing in chapter and another in the next. Once again, Im not telling you to give up, but a lot of improvement is needed. Im not an expert and not a writer, just a reader who gave his opinion.If you think Im wrong dont hesitate to let me know.Cumps,

ntr lets goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

It has a very good Storyline With Good Plot and Good Introduction It Has a mixture of Fantasy action Romance and sect cultivation Even though it kinda wrong

The writing style is really good honestly.The novel is not the usual Chinese glitch it's very enjoyable it feels like it's old school and at the same time it looks like a western novel.I really enjoy this I hope the update will be faster