Writing Quality: It... isn't good. While the basic grammar (the word-by-word grammar) is fine, trying to keep in mind when [MC] or [other characters] are talking is a genuinely tough task, due to the lack of dialogue marks (the "[words of dialogue]"). And often, even reading is hard, due to a severe lack of commas... Because of that, I found myself skimming over the paragraphs. Author, feel free to refer to some comments I left on the chapters. I can give a bit of an extra explaination, if needed.Story Development: Too early to judge. I did like the concept, though.Character Design: It's... I don't know how to feel about it? We're presented to [MC], an everyday man who had his dreams crushed by society's cruel rules... Only for him to react calmly to all of the events taking place in the Library, with the ones that stood out to me being the tentacles, and the bloodline recreation. In the former, [MC] had some panic, but almost forgot about everything right after?? With something similar happening with the bloodline recreation. Both the [MC] and his "best friend" had a similar reaction to that one, with them even being able to joke and flirt casually around *after* having gone through a potentially life-and-death experience. A horribly painful one, at that.I was going to rate this 3/5 because of William and the former Librarian Keeper (Both of which generated some interest for me), but I decided against it. Update Stability: By WN's standards (consistent 7-14 chapters per werk), this is low. You're barely starting, though, so I'd say this is one of the easier things to fix.World Background: Up to chapter 7-8, there's little information. A few names were dropped in the dialogue, but nothing explained in depth yet. Only reason why I'm giving it 3/5 is because the Library itself is interesting.So, yeah. I don't have much else to say here  as I've already said everything in the previous paragraphs... Wait, nevermind, I do.Consider changing some of the tags, as certain things might be seen as deal-breakers for many. (An example possibly being the lack of an LGTB tag. This one is a genuine piece of advice, so you can avoid waking up to a bunch of insults and threats over having a kiss between two best friends.)... That's about it. Have a good day/night, readers/author!

I use to think Author-sama I am too old for fantasy novels. But this one is captivating. I will adding this to my Library. More power.

I absolutely adore what is here so far. So I decided to post this review in hopes the author can update faster. While I'm not sure if this deserves 5 full stars I’m sure it’s close. So I’m willing to scrape up the extra points. The world building I feel like is the only somewhat lacking part of the novel. With that being said, there’s only a few chapters here so far. I’m willing to bet by chapter 5 that will cease to be the case.Now I’ll point out the parts I love. The writing style is absolutely amazing in this novel but I recognize it might not suit everyone’s taste.It’s very descriptive but the descriptions are short and to the point. Plentiful, but concise. It’s also amazing at building an environment, yet some people prefer more attention to immediate action or dialogue. I can say those points are not lacking. The dialogue has never felt flat to me, although the god could have been given a bit more care, everything else is perfect. It’s never generic, and the characters also stay consistent while still being given depth. I believe as long as this style is kept and is not changed due to negativity, and the story stays unique and immersive. This can hit top 10. I have faith

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Love the development of this story. Good writing 👍

What can I say. After devouring RNIG in two weeks I‘m really excited about this new work. I needed the first chapter to get into the setting but after that I didn’t even notice how much I was reading until I reached the last uploaded chapter. Try it. It will probably be worth your time.

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a very interesting bookbut please update 🙏🙏🙏

Very nice book. Glad I stumbled on it, keep up the good work. Amazing work.

I require 100 chapters a day please I need more

The story has an intriguing premise? but it suffers from slow pacing and overly detailed descriptions. The characters show promise, but their development is hindered by the lack of dialogue and interaction, The world background is vague, leaving many question unanswerd. Overall, the story has potential, but it needs more refinement.

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