Writing: The quality of writing is good, consistent and with its own flair. A few hiccups and typos, but nothing that would break the immersion. Overall its pretty decent and feels like it would be polished even more over time.Updates: So far the updates have been consistent and the chapter length does not wary over the updates which is a plus. consistency is good.Story: A bit confusing in the start, especially since we start with the Girl's POV while the summary mentions it to be a MALE MC story, but give it a few chapters for the mystery and plot to settle in. Gets better and intriguingCharacter design: My comments over the various chapters will display how I feel about this. If you can make a reader hate your characters based on their interactions, that means a good job. World Background: This seems almost good, but could be better. Or rather I would say, the way its been put out for the readers needs a little more explanation. But maybe more will be explained as I read further. Overall: A good story so far, definitely worth a read.Score: 4.9

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

I have read this book up to chapter 10 now the latest chapter and so far I’m loving the series. I expected It to be similar to one other werewolf book I’ve read, but it’s actually really not. The only similarities they have is the heat and wolflessness of the female lead. Otherwise the book is completely different. Good job author. I appreciate when writers are original. Good book you have here!

I should've left this review long ago but it just went over my head.this story got me so hooked I can't explain how good it is 🥹. It has got me waiting for an update everyday 🥲 literally the best 🙂u200d↕️.

Oh! Two worlds time line, I through it just in parallel world but I hope there will be connect within real time line as well. Can't wait to read next chapters!

so far I love this story but have you ever thought about creating a what ifs somebody reincarnated as Poseidon or Hades or it can be he could be a Archangel in the High School DxD and he is the very first born child of God his self way before Lucifer and Michael I'm just wondering you don't have to do it

Man the introduction kept me interested, the mc is already goated asl, this novel has alot of potential and i look forward to seeing how the world building will look and the side cast. Keep up the work gng

Nice story, stable updates, but the author still says he even though the MC is now a female. If that was fixed or would make it a lot better.

Author here! I have a lot planned for this story, and I can't wait for you to experience it! As we go along this journey together, I'm sure your connection with the characters and the story itself will only grow deeper. I can’t wait to experience this story with each and every one of you!(And of course, I had to give myself a five-star rating—I'm my own biggest fan, after all.)

tired of dragons, celestial and demon bodies. let enjoy the evolution among humans and the rise of the beast king himself. can't truly wait to see how the story unfold

HEYYYYY author, i was wondering when did u go but who would have guessed that you started a new book and let me tell you its… AMAZING, i am a huge fan of yours from ur other books.but anyway let me start taking about ur novel instead of glazing lmaoo.. about that tho, have to keep it short because i don’t have a clue how to write a review.. ummm its great u should read it too,      ALL  HAIL AUTHOUSS

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