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OverlordOfDeath
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- July 1,2024
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this drama is very nice and the book also good I love this so much drama 💘🤌🏻
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I was recommended this by a good friend of mine so far one chapter in I can’t wait to see how this story will story progress , Xerxes is such a great character and I can’t wait to see the mystery of the fallen kingdom unfold.❤️❤️❤️
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This novel takes you to the world of fascinating romance and magically pleasurable yet unexpected scenes that makes its readers firmly bound to it and also urges them to want more of it!
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The translation is not the best, but it is understandable. I prefer the Spanish version.
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Shit's peak not gon lie. Workrate's mad hard too, you'd swear bro's locked in a basement😂 Author blink 10 times for an SOS😂Truly loving every minute of this book, there aren't any annoying cliches which is already a win in my book.The story just flows seamlessly.The Author just knows how to write, the story draws you in pretty well.You got a crashout FL who's not annoying and is actually likable. The romance and interaction between the two is a nice.The story is developing pretty well, the characters are well written, the world building is also coming along pretty nice, isn't rushed or anything, and it blends in pretty well as the story is progressing.The MC isn't overly emotional and stiff, he's anMC who's actually fun to follow. A smart MC. I have nothing to complain about.Overall great.
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A beautifully written novel with depth and insight. The pacing was perfect, and the characters felt real. Definitely worth reading for .Add atleast one r18 scene every 10-15 chapters. please 🥺
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The mysterious girl??you will be very shocked to know who that is??Please I will need you guys to please comment, corrections are allowed too.. please cheer me up to post more chapters
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Shouta is an exciting character. The story is too fast-paced. The plot is amazing. But I just felt like it lacked something of explanation or reaction in some parts. But I know as the story progresses, the author will improve. Continue to write and learn, author. Enjoy the journey of being a writer.
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Unique super galing ng writer i thought it just a normal story na nababasa lang and familiarity but it isn't super cool ng gumawa i hope madami pang ma release yung writer I've waiting for the 2nd Chapter
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I can totally relate to the sarcastic humor amidst the eerie tension. If there’s one thing I’d tweak, it’s making the mission and stakes a bit clearer. Also, diving deeper into the backstory could make the character even more relatable.
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Really great start. Has Potential 😁.
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It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read.Things to improve:Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader.Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public.All in all, keep the good work
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