it's a good story i think it has potential although I don't listen this kind of novel but i think it's really good

So far, this novel has a wide use of vocabulary, which makes for engaging reading. The writing itself is enjoyable, with well-crafted sentences that showcase the author’s skill. However, by Chapter 8, the story feels rushed. Events move quickly without much time for buildup, making it hard to fully connect with the world or characters.Speaking of the world, there isn’t much in the way of world-building. The setting feels vague, with little detail to anchor the reader in a specific time or place. This makes it difficult to become fully immersed. Additionally, the plot lacks a clear sense of direction. While some novels take time to unfold, this one doesn’t seem to be building toward anything specific—at least not yet.Overall, while the writing itself is strong, the pacing and lack of depth in both world-building and plot progression make it difficult to fully engage with the story. I’ll see if things improve later on, but so far, it feels somewhat underdeveloped.Another big issue I have is the lack one quotation marks. There is no use of them at all which can make it annoying to understand who is talking, for example “ ” - for when a character is talking out loud ‘ ‘ - for when mc is reading someone’s thoughts But anyway good effort from the author, can tell they care about writing.

FL is such a refreshing protagonist. I can see she won't be your regular protagonist, not someone with weak heart.

I'm really looking forward to this new book by Pupa. It has many of our favourite tropes—ladykiller in love, green tea bitch, puppy love, new old flame, the one that got away—and Pupa is sensitive enough to keep them enjoyable rather than overwrought and contrived.Nonetheless it was a real pity that he did not call Pierre a mother fucker.

'Child of Ruin' is a gripping and emotionally charged novel that left me breathless. The author's vivid world-building and complex characters drew me into a world of darkness and redemption. With its unflinching exploration of trauma, sacrifice, and the human condition, this novel is a must-read for fans of dark fantasy and dystopian fiction. Be prepared for a wild ride filled with unexpected twists and turns!

I'm desperately waiting for chapter 30, and author did not upload today's chapter on time. Although it's a five star review, it's also a way of venting my complaints. Thank you!

Story is little bit slow but concept is good. Good keep it up. This new your rewrite version is better than last you deleted. Let's say your story have potential to earn something.

i always like your novels and I've read(red) all of 'em. tho i can't help but laugh anytime I thought your pen name sounds like ( jotaro )

this story is good to readall the best for author

This is the best romance I've ever read here. Update daily please

One of the first things that stuck out was the family dynamic between the characters. It's not a family of one note, nor is the main character the one odd one out. It's a refreshing change of pace. The short chapters make it an easy read that keeps you moving along smoothly. Overall very nice definitely adding it.

Great work for a first time creator really liked the story. There could be some slight improvements but it’s good overall. I expect more in the future