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Usually I try to finish the book to the end or the last chapter translated but I can't read this. The concept is interesting but there's no conflict or solid goal driving the plot that keeps me hooked. Yes there's action driving the MC and MLs to do stuff, but it feels like there's no purpose in them.Other than that, the structuring and world building is also a little lacking. Yes the author easily conveys what the world is and who's who, but there's so little descriptors to tell me what's going on. It's very easy to get whiplash when reading because you can easily miss scene transitions too. They use all their words to build up the lore of characters but don't really spare words for the present of what's happening then and there.What I do like is the interactions between MC and the various MLs. I think the absurdity of the MLs and MC's exasperation is funny. But even that doesn't really make up for the lacking of drive for the plot. Especially if the author is trying to set up potential love affairs, I feel like it isn't working because theirs no cohesion and it feels very forced.I do see myself picking this up again though and giving it another chance. Again, I do like the concept of this.
