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oh yeah the fenrir tribe is protecting a legendary sword in a labrynth valley which makes the user go insane and you need someone from the wolf tribe to guide you there, lets just ignore that surely nothing will happen to that. Did I forget to mention that to keep the user from being insane they need to absorb fenrir blood? MCs decision and future planning sucks ass. The princess of the fenrir tribe literally proposed to you and you had the power to help her tribe but he did nothing about it.
[collapse]Another one of my annoyances was this, Spoileroh neat lets create a f*cking town without the permission of the king by just buying land. Surely even if I buy land in anothers country im not liable to accept their rule since I made a frontier village on it. Like dude. You may have bought the land but you are still susceptible to the country's rule. like everyone in that country (or more like everyone in this story) is a dumbass. Someone can literally just build a town without anyone questioning as long as they offer to frontier it, that I can understand. But not checking up on it is pretty s*upid. Also what the MC did is basically seceding from the country the land was originally from and then acting like oh im just making a village farmland nothing special, while also accepting "legendary species" and expect others to not get worried. Its like literally you are a king of a nation and you see your neighbors amass nukes and expect you to not be worried about it. The kings response is the most sane I have seen which makes me think he might just be the most normal f*cking character. Not smart, but not dumb either. Every other character just decides to antagonize someone with a f*cking nuke while the king just tries to have a wait and see option. Neither for war or peace. Just a soft balance of non-aggression.
[collapse]And oh boy here it comeSpoilerFenrir tribe gets attacked. You would think they would bring more people as reinforcements but no. They just bought like what, 5 people? What annoys me more is yea the hero stole the sword. Lets ignore him and eait for him to self destruct like what? Yea lets just leave them wandering the labrynth and starve to death, sure thats a sound strategy but its pretty f*cking useless if you dont leave someone to monitor it from the shadows. Surprise surprise, they get out of the labrynth. But in the most s*upiddest way possible. Sui attacks someone from the royal capital (which is f*cking far by the way) in self defense and blasts him away witha tornado which coincidentally goes to the labrynth and attacks the hero lifting them out of the maze and freeing them WITH the sword. Like what is this story telling. Im losing braincells.
[collapse]Over all ive read a lot of novels in this site and this one disappointed me the most that it made me feel like I need to leave a review to tell people to just stay away and let it die down. Its so bad. Im usually the type that says if you dont like it dont read it no need to leave a review since different strokes for different people and all but this novel is REALLY just so bad I wanted to save others from reading it.
