I really like how you write the steamy chapters. It involves emotions and does not necessarily go directly to the deed! Keep it up! The honeymoon just started!
Great start to an already amazing book : ) I believe out of the whole series ( and I love them all) this one is going to be Number 1 for me. Well done Cj yet again you have me hooked ; )
The spelling mistakes made right through out made it very difficult to really enjoy But I guess it was pretty good if you can overlook the entire lack of editing
I don't understand the hatred of O'Dell.towards Sylvia. I'm still on chapter 65 and the story looks interesting at this point. Reading the comments here, I am now considering dropping the book.
