I Love You the Most in the World [Entertainment Circle] Chapter 67 part2 Discussion

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  • #1
At first, I really like this novel. I really do. But there's too many padding. The same thing get repeated over and over and over again I mostly skim and skip just to get to the main point. The writing is not beautiful enough for me to read descriptions without meaning or plot.
 
  • #3
very good story. sweet..dramatic. Almost kind of wish for a little more
 
  • #5
omg i love this book cant wait for the next chapter
 
  • #6
I have been waiting to finish this ahhhhh !!!!!
 
  • #7
loving it with romance flying around the story
 
  • #9
why do you unnecessary want to make the story lengthy? is there any benefit... maybe u can earn more right? I mean lets assume Tyler lover her but he can treat every other women in the story better than the women he loved? how stupid he literally abuses her every time very badly, mentally...
 
  • #10
I really like how you write the steamy chapters. It involves emotions and does not necessarily go directly to the deed! Keep it up! The honeymoon just started!
 
  • #11
Great start to an already amazing book : ) I believe out of the whole series ( and I love them all) this one is going to be Number 1 for me. Well done Cj yet again you have me hooked ; )
 
  • #13
The spelling mistakes made right through out made it very difficult to really enjoy But I guess it was pretty good if you can overlook the entire lack of editing
 
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