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Not bad. Came here after reading the manhwa. Basically smart MC prepares for war. Logan kinda reminds me of Cale Henituse, but might just be me. Story wise, I am enjoying it. Translation wise, it needs some work.Idk how accurate the translation is, but it's mostly readable. There are some glaring problems that may annoy readers tho. I would highly recommend getting a proofreader/editor to the Translator.Examples:Spoiler
- Inconsistent names, sometimes even within the same sentence (Logan, Rogan, Padric, Patrick, Dwayne, Dwain etc)
- Cut off chapters (I'm assuming. Sometimes it cut off mid-word)
- Change of pov, sometimes. Generally in third person perspective but sometimes randomly changes to first person perspective.
- One of the chapters I think is just a straight up summary
- Confused pronouns? Sometimes can refer to a character when it should be referring to an other character in the scene (i.e. Using "her" when it should be "he")