I’m the Villain’s Constellation but I’m Broke Chapter Completed Discussion

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It's a pretty good story and there are plenty of the tropes I like: transmigration, hunters, OP couple

  • MC, like most leads in Hunter stories, is self-sacrificing
  • ML, as usual, is the obsessive rude S-ranker who's only kind to the MC
  • Side characters are pretty interesting. (My favorite is Apollo / Appa-pollo / Dad-pollo)
Now, there are some things I didn't like. Spoilers ahead.

Spoiler
  • The ML's little brother, who's supposed to be a turning point for his personality, was never given any spotlight. Little dude was asleep, supposedly woke up, and then we never hear about him again.
  • MC's connection to the parallel world was revealed too abruptly. It also felt like there wasn't enough explanation about who and what the god "Destruction" is.
  • Actual main boss / villain wasn't foreshadowed enough that he kinda seemed to appear out of nowhere. I didn't get enough time to either love or hate him.
  • Bunch of details were scrapped. 1) MC's other skills that could've been a huge plot device weren't explored (specifically his healing skill and his other OP skill that was used only once). 2) MC's clothes (the one in the cover), which seemed to be of great significance, was mentioned one time and we don't even know if he wore it. 3) Apparently, MC's soul was corrupted a bit due to the minor villain, but that was forgotten. So much for the efforts and build-up trying to minimize the damage.
  • We never get to know how the corrupted constellations turned out after the end. Also no closure with the friendly constellations.
  • The ending is a bit too... normal. I'm not against it, it just felt weird after all that haha
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Don't get me wrong, it is a nice light read. Just don't expect a lot of detailing in this story because it is a bit short in comparison to the plot potential. It feels like this should be 300 chapters, but alas, we have less than half of that.
 
  • #2
please upload new chapters..cant wait
 
  • #3
omg lady please give me all of the rest of the chapters.i need the ending.iam ready for book 3.please remember to name the 3rd book.at the end of this book.
 
  • #7
I'm here, just got a chance to start reading, I'm too excited and already liking the look of things.
 
  • #10
I am in Love with Atlas. I would love him for myself.
 
  • #11
nice lesson there, please consider using data as one of payment mean if possible
 
  • #12
No editing, simple grammer and spelling errors, as well as inconsistent story details in first few pages.
 
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