- #1
the writing is immature. The MC is weak and passive (if you think the MC of rent-a-girlfriend a wimp, which he is, this MC is on another level). The girlfriend and best friend are hella deranged for no reason. The sister character is a mess.LN scenarios can go crazy sometimes but at least create characters that make sense.the chapter often go: multiple small paragraph to lead the reader to what the character going to do or say -> the character do or say just that -> go back to explaining why the character do or say that.probably the result of short chapter format but yeah, it feels like running in circle reading this shit.
