- #1
To put it in a blunt manner the story streches on too far. By the time the romance begins to happen... You no longer want the romance to happen. I get that this is what the author wanted but in all honesty It's pretty much idiotic.Think of it like this...The main character is worstes bad guy around (aka) he's an ab*serThe female lead struggles to escape (aka) she gets nowhereThe father despised his daughter because she could have been someone elses child due to her hair (aka) Spoiler
he literally admits he knows she is his real daughter
[collapse]None of these characters grow. None of these characters will grow. All that grows is a disgusting unattractive obsession. It's not even love.