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Once upon a time, there's a little Girl who lost everything. She lost Her heart and it make Her heart broken. She lost her happiness, and Her only source of light, Her mother. And in Her last moment, She make a promise to Herself that She Will take revenge to everyone who Made Her suffer. The people, the royalty, the kingdom, and the world including the God who make Her suffer until now.Yeah. If its a fairy tale, that'll be the prolog. Well, aside from that, the introduction of the story' seems a little awkward at the beginning. Everything feel like kinda forced to the story' and the Storytelling feel kinda sluggish. But overall is good. The worldbuilding is not really bad and the author tell about the story' between 5 country/kingdom that exist and each one have their own plus and minus. Well, from my position, there's still not much plot that I found before step into this chapter. But overall I like the story. Its kinda mainstream but not mainstream at the same time or I can say its Minority type.Well, give it a try.
