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So the MC wants to be a edgy freak. Keeping secrets to protect his love ones. That sounds good right? Well guess what, he is a simp for the girls to the extreme. The amount of BS he does for them gets magically unraveled by chapter 16 when the Main Heroine freaking minds rpes him when he is asleep. Where the MCs conscious spills all of the info of the past life and the present life in a sub par way. Like seriously, the whole story couldn't even get through a single arc before the author disgusting fetish gets in the way. The writer obviously wants the insta gratification in satisfying his dark hero complex.No need to write an engaging story of keeping secrets and what not. The author took the easy way out and this made the story into one of the many generic misunderstanding tropes. But the big kicker is it lacks any comedy at all. Its all grim derp nonsense of wanting to soldier the world's burdens, but without any of the drama that comes with. Since all the heroines are going to find out the MC's 'secret' anyway. And no amount of system punishments will amount to anything since I doubt anyone is going to die for real.Yeah I forget about that too. He has a system that gives out PUNISHMENTS. This is the literal epitome of what not to do with system fics. Who wants to read a MC who's every action is controlled? Not me!Blehm this is freaking awful. How this is rated so high I would never know. People got some serious bad tastes. At least read a generic CN than this. At least there are some better climaxes in those.Rate 1.5/5
