The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me Chapter 20 Discussion

  • #1
Overrated.

I noticed inconsistencies, for example, the protagonist who apparently destroyed the world once, sided with the demons and still can't see a child starving, and for helping, ends up exposing himself as 'good' to the heroine, how can he kept as bad for years in the first timeline if he can't keep up a week in the new timeline? I understand that he has no evil nature, but if he was sacrificing himself to save the world it's strange that he's pure to such an extent.

If he's willing to give up his own life, why he doesn't think twice about creating variables in the world just because of a hungry child? This is strange, it is counter-wise to put the salvation of humanity at stake in a totally irresponsible way.

I tried to read the work but it doesn't seem like I'll be able to move on, but even without reading I can already see the protagonist saving the heroines here and there and them discovering the truth one by one, I like romance, but I can't swallow many contradictions, like hate to the point of sacrificing themselves to kill turning love into a 5 minute conversation? How convenient, no?
 
  • #2
the book so far is really good can't wait for the next chapter
 
  • #3
I'm sure it's a great book.  I just couldn't get past the bad English and repetitive word usage.   maybe have an editor look at it before it gets published.
 
  • #4
can you please get the point where Rosalind finds Estie is her daughter and Byron find out the boys are his. this has gotten boring.
 
  • #6
From chapter 275 onwards, i think the translator had been changed. Very poor English!!
 
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