The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me Chapter 42 Discussion

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As of right now I'm on chapter 42. While I do like the premises and such I give a 2.5-3/5 it has some flaws, but generally overall good.

The writing is where the problem is, there's no building up in some chapters. It just gives you a backstory in one chapter with a slam dunk and expect you to feel something, and it does that a couple of times with two of the characters, and it's only chapter 42!

You can honestly relate with the main character as it's been told through his point of view and you can understand his feelings behind it. But I don't know, the writer tries to bring out emotional scenes and it just falls short.

Therefore I can only give it a 2.5-3/5. Just above average.

Characters - 3.5/5

Writing - 2/5

Plot - 3/5

World building - 2.5/5
 
  • #2
I really love it I want to read more...I thought the chapter are free to read....how sad..I need to buy again
 
  • #3
I wanted to like this but it’s constant back and forth are giving me whiplash. The main guy is so demeaning and crude towards her before even giving her a chance to explain anything.
 
  • #4
Book two (Alpha Christian) is now available.
 
  • #6
thank you for your hard work I'm looking forward for more chapter. I like the story very much keep up the good work
 
  • #7
خحخخخكككككممممهخخههمه تحممكممككككةتت نحج
 
  • #8
Leaving her daughter without hesitation. That’s what you get when you don’t have brain. You followed your evil parents who does not even care about you. I’m tired of this stupid story all the  characters are all dumb just the author.
 
  • #10
Simply wonderful and heartbreaking story. Right know I'm in tears and can't stop crying. congratulations to the writer
 
  • #11
Fantastic plot, and the author leaves you wanting more!!!!! Can’t wait to read book two.
 
  • #12
I’m freakin hooked already. Read book 1 already. So excited for this one.
 
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