The Circumstances of a Terminal Patient Who Kidnapped His Stepsibling Chapter -- Discussion

  • #1
I'm so angry that I read this novel.

Someone should definitely add the slice of life tag in. I avoid that tag like a plague because I don't like reading such things. If I want a slice of life I would go watch Animal Discovery channel because that is much more interesting than whatever authors made their humans do.

The only part that is interesting is the first arc/"prologue". The part directly after the prologue is fine too but the following parts are such a bore. I am so angry I read this novel. I have more I want to rant about but that would include spoilers so I won't. Do read this if you enjoy slice of life.
 
  • #3
please why is the rest of the episodes not updated yet
 
  • #5
Good, engaging story, but that’s where the +ve ends sadly.  Written like an excited child, text has missing words, additional words that shouldn’t be there, VERY poor punctuation & spelling errors on every page! Writer often forgets names of her own characters. GET A PROOFREADER! won’t read any more
 
  • #8
Beautiful writing. Love every character in this novel. More updates please. Thank you ...
 
  • #9
my heart and mind hold no words how badly I've just simply loved this  story  nd I really love Ariana character.... Incredibly unimaginably undoubtedly awesome ❤️❤️❤️
 
  • #12
LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Another great read from the amazing Muse!
 
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