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This. This is the story that I would never stop loving. I MTL-ed from 20-50, and despite the MTL is wonky, it didn't deter from the fact that this story is amazing. The MC and the ML was really written well. They don't actually have a lot of dialogues but the author made up for it in her narration. With this, it's safe to say that with little dialogue that they have, they can understand each other completely, and it makes their dynamics so much better.The slow burn in this story is the one you'd never get tired and impatient of. MC chases the ML in such an intriguing and cheeky but classy way that it literally Spoiler
leaves the ML speechless. He even said that he found himself in a position that he couldn't do anything but accept the advances and it's not in a bad way. He obviously could, the MC gives her all the space and opportunity to step back in case he's not into it, but I suppose he's that enamored by her that he just couldn't.
[collapse]The author did well in explaining the thoughts of the two characters, why one was hesistating hence the slow burn. These parts where the author narrates instead of giving the two more dialogue felt so pure to me and made me love the novel more.
