Turning Chapter 650 Discussion

Good story line but the telling of the story was rushed in places. A proof read of your story for grammar and spelling would have improved the reader experience.

Thank you Author for this lovely book.

I love the story until you get to the \\" wait fir new chapters \\" crap.  I now have yo books I'm invested in reading but I get some little dribble of a chapter a day ?  I can read that in 10 minutes ! I refuse to start another book and be kept hanging!

Enjoyed this book very much, now ready for next one

Very nice read, loved the happy ending!

I love the story

please  more chapters

cant wait to read every chapter