A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 419 Discussion

  • #1
There are a number of negative reviews, but I absolutely love this story. It is a fun read in first person. Yuki is a unique and entertaining character. He can be brutal to his enemies but always puts his family before himself (as it should be). Most of the story is about his lighthearted dungeon life, but it can also show the deadly challenges that accompany making a world most ideal for his family life. It was a great enough story that I am now rereading it for the third time.

However, almost all of the chapters suddenly disappeared a few weeks ago. What happened? Was the translation discontinued and deleted? I really hope it comes back and starts updating again.
 
  • #2
welll daaaannnggg that's how to a write a book so unpredictable so messy so juicy so everything,m so impressed by this book,but is there a spin off about Angelo and Izzy I think there should be,all in all this is a very nice book.
 
  • #4
your story is really different from others,unique idea ,unique story line, amazing.keep it up??
 
  • #5
The language is often too floral which does give the impression of trying too hard. This is a shame as the plot is rather gripping. There are many language mistakes, too, especially a lack of knowledge of irregular verbs, but also missing words and word mix ups. Punctuation is lacking.
 
  • #8
The book is great but when are there going to be more chapters. I would like to see what happens when they get to school and to see what punishments Alpha Theo comes up for those two
 
  • #9
Just finished this and it was genuinely great. It was very well written. It made me gasp, laugh, cry and feel so excited. There were some welcoming predictable moments and some total jaw dropper moments. Would definitely recommend!
 
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