A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 296 Discussion

Story started really good, I hoped that it'll not turn up to be a tr*sh. The way of speech of MC outright annoying but it was tolerable but it just goes out of control as the story moves forward that it just feels straight to boring that it's happening the same way again & again, it just felt like out-of-place. And at starting it was not an issue but now? Everytime MC sees kids & his wives & the way they act, he uses "adorable", "cute" & whatnot words so much that it feels like the author is trying to just fill the page. In each chapter, he states adorable, cute, cutie pie, words for like 5-6 or more times that it becomes annoying.

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First100chap are kinda good, but as the story continues MC starts helping the neighbouring country & when the king & governor just do what 'has' to be done, the MC straightly state that the MC owes the king & the governor. This way of thinking is quite idiotic & not logical at all.

Story starts going down when he has to take Hero as his bride (dragon convinces him). After that it just feels like he's just helping & helping the hero while other characters are side characters. Lefi (Dragon) was not given enough screen time& it just felt like total let down, right now it feels like the story of romance of demon lord& hero, cuz he helps the hero just too much. After marry her he helped the country too much that it doesn't Evel feel like he's neutral. At this rate he won't even hesitate to go to war of human & demon, for that country & the Hero. And the way he distribute things, he gives teleport necklace to characters like Charlotte. And for the hero, she's totally useless & the only thing she can do is giggling, chuckling & whispering, while the other characters really feel like important, the hero is totally useless & always asking for help.

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Many irrelevant things are written, kinda feels like that the chao is just written to fill the word requirement. At this point of time I can just see this series going down not because of harem but because the hero & just his irrelevant things, the way the hero is given a spotlight, other characters feel like highly side characters to me.

Characters don't actually feel like acting according to the logic & the way how things actually was & should be, kinda feels like author is forcing the hero & the MC to remain together.

I seriously hope that the story improves. Like a twist is needed, like the Hero was actually using the MC for her country's sake, so that he'll help them & she actually doesn't love him.

I hope characters starts acting like how they should & acting via logic. Just to give fan service & make the story just "another" cringe & idiotic story.