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c33The name... the author writes the name, like a guy who has written these stories before or at least read enough to the point to competently write what he has said in attempted better form. Why then did he give this novel a name that reeks of a first time attempt by newbie author. Besides that this story so far is pretty solid if you have read the genre before you have read this before. It does not offer anything new, but at the same time it is good enough with an overused troupe that I could see a first time to the genre reader picking this up and calling it the best novel.c144What is going on... this thing started really great. Had the powers, the intrigue, the action, the plot. It had it all, and yet now. It is just bogged down with filler content. I feel like I'm reading something like the text script for "Boy meets world" a random middle school episode. This thing digressed so much Ive lost so much enthusiasm trying to just push past. However, it is just so much unnecessary filler nonsense. This is like reading "My Death Flags Show No Sign of Ending" and it focus on Harold stokes making friends and maintaining his friendships, 7/10 of the story. With the rest being about solving crisis. It is absolutely supposed to be the other way around. I don't want to read an entire chapter, with the biggest highlight being a boy and a girl had a silent argument. Resulting in them doing chores in separate parts of the house. While classmates stand around befuddled as to if that means they are in a romantic relationship. (Too many chapters like this) This is bordering on shoujo which is a good genre but I started this novel with an action series based premise. Not even something like Natsume's book of friends where you from the get go understand OK action is not even so much secondary as much as it is back-burner. 3.5/5c168Then it is back again at the original pacing after at least a rough 30 chapters of filler padding this novel could be cut down alot still a good story just unnecessarily padded.
