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This novel has quite a lot of problems.That's talk about the MC first. She has no personality. I'm 30 chapters in and there is nothing can differentiate her from any other MC. A story with this kind of MC can still work, but you will need at least one interesting side character and a lot of different character povs. But, this novel focuses entirely on the MC, and with such a boring MC, a part of this novel itself becomes quite boring too.Second, the side characters. The side characters are either a*sholes or just cold for no reason. Every single one of them. It's like the author doesn't know how to write someone that's not an a*shole.We got no description of how the world looks, and there's a few plot holes. Most of this is probably because the author just didn't bother writing the details of how the world works and skipped a lot of stuffs he probably should add.The chapters are also so short that it's just unsatisfying to read.In the end, you get a novel that just doesn't give its readers any motivation to read it. It is very boring and aggravating to read.
