- #1
- status: dropped it
- I SERIOUSLY CANNOT READ THIS ANYMORE at first the plot was interesting cos like the MC transmigrated and he was a martial art person before transmigration also? So he was very skilled in defending himself etc aft transmigration
- author got too much ideas then put it in plot the ruin the whole flow like what halfway the MC was alrd part of the whole transmigration and suddenly born there also? Like huh? Dun even make sense it literally has so many plot holes
- and the MC compared to the furst 20 chpts aft tht fully pisses me off cos the author keeps FKIN EMPHASIZING bout the old MC and what he did like how he damaged the mecha to endanger to ML so this MC feels guilty but the thing is if its one time or two time its ok BUT ITS EVERRYYTIMEEE ITS SO FKIN ANNOYIN YKNOW so repetitive the author fr has this problem they repeat a lot of stuff non stop like how "the galaxy people will never believe the general and the genius" bla bla bla LIKE WE GET IT OK WE GET ITTTT
- because of dat^^ (points above) the fluff home interactions get ruined also also its so draggyyyy and the author also makes the MC TOOOO OVR OP some authors know how to implement it well but THIS ONE DOES NOT BUT THEY STILL KEEP TRYIN then again ruin the whole plot
- also they make the MC break out of chtr frm the og chtr of the MC (not the old MC) like make it seem like the MC too fragile-ah LIKE ITS ANNOYIN and a bit too try hard
- ML is OK the only OK chtr fr not too annoyin or forced
- anyways I had so much expectations but its ALLL ruined anywyas this story is not worth ur time
- peace out
- rating: 6/10
- plot: 5/10
- chtrs: 6/10
