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Great fanfiction of One Piece. There's a lot flaw because author develop his own system, probably based on his understanding so in later story the story would be far different than original. But thats ok, its fanfiction after all.The story is about MC who reborn into one piece world (altho the isekai element itself isnt important at all). He got his own system, card that take power from all kind of anime character. Still, with his system he's not suddenly op but I cannot say he isnt overpowered either because in later chapter his power become so broken.Character, all same from one piece. Although there's some important character from onepiece isnt mentioned at all, and some character got wrong background. Example :Spoiler
Shirahoshi isnt mentioned at all altho we know she is ancient weapon, no fishman island arc although MC known jinbee. Koby also barely exist although he should be join the war. Water Seven character also didnt exist (Rob Luci etc, author did mention them tho)
[collapse]Plot, is brilliant. I did like how author comes with his own theory to explain things that not explained yet in one piece. So this fanfiction probably isnt relatable in future. Also because it, hardcore one piece fans should be prepare because this story got his own explanation to some things. Example (some big spoiler ahead so you may not open it) :SpoilerTeach has several heart exist in his body to explain his special body condition. Ace and Bonney actually cousin, as bonney use her fruit ability to pause ace mom pregnancy to 20 month (based on one piece info still not explained yet), Ancient weapon are just pseudo nuclear dragon, etc
[collapse]Cons, First would be the level vague of main character is. Earlier part in novel, author use 'energy power' to describe difference power in one piece. But later on, author use level instead on MC, which didnt serve any purpose to become comparison to his enemies. Not mention author also didnt list how much card MC really have so reader should list it every time MC got new card. Second, how MC broke the one piece storyline but original straw hat pirate still got together. SpoilerMC even take robin to his crew which actually really important character on luffy crew for encrypt poneglyph. OOF
[collapse] Third it would be pace is random and confusing. I didnt really need detailed time but when author said it has been time luffy go to dressrosa when MC goes on some small arc, its actually mean 2 years dude. Welp, there's a lot cons more actually.However, Overall I did enjoy this fanfiction a lot, really recommended if you love one piece franchise. Its fun experience. MC is likeable for me, and the storyline base almost stick to original foundation except MC system. 5/5
