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The premise is cool. The translation is actually pretty good (which is becoming more and more rare these days on this site). The overall storyline is pretty nice, or rather the outline of the story is.Now the execution is where this story really falters. I'm someone who likes a good old OP MC, seeing how he influences the world etc, so I REALLY wanted to like this story. But this MC is just totally clueless and blunders through the story not even realising anything he ever does. He is terminally s*upid, while at the same time being a "genius" who can do literally anything.The reason why I say he is terminally s*upid is he is raised in a village full of heroes who are all turbo OP, so his common sense is warped at the start, which makes sense honestly. So far so good. He then goes out into the outside world and starts doing things that everyone around him just can't believe are happening. Every single time he does something everyone freaks out and is amazed, and he just says/thinks something along the line "This isnt a big deal, they are exaggerating" or "what is there to be surprised about, anyone can do this" (Spoiler alert they can't). Which you can hand wave for a couple of chapters, but even after meeting with dozens of people, goes through multiple towns etc etc, he still thinks that everything he does is normal and is confused that everyone is socked, showing that he is borderline ret*rded. He is uncapable of learning basic common sense. I mean people tell him exactly WHY what he is doing is amazing, they tell him that no one else can do it etc, and it just goes in one ear and out the other and he hand waves it.The MC just never grows. Power wise he is max strength from the start, which is fine, but personality wise he is the exact same chapter 1 and later chapters.This all in turn makes the story just boring. Its not bad, its not good, its just there. If you really have nothing better to do you can read it, its decent enough for a total time waster, but if you have literally anything better to do, don't bother with it.
