A Painting of the Villainess as a Young Lady Chapter 30 Discussion

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  • #1
meh. I really loved the premise but I've noticed when ever an author tries to tackle a sensitive and serious illness like depression they never can completely do it right or show an unrealistic/plausible reaction from those related.

If they wanted her to interact with her family they should not have locked her up in a separate building where her family who didn't care about her kept invading and disturbing her time... even once she found something she enjoyed.

I would have really loved this novel if they went about the family interactions in another way. It started off interesting with her being self aware and not changing too much but It also could have been less generic if they fully depicted her depression and gave more depth to the characters
 
  • #2
loved the book,  it definitely broke me a couple times but so glad with the ending.  would love to read a sequel!
 
  • #4
Her voice is so velvety smooth I bet she could make a shopping list sound great awesome line
 
  • #6
Great Book but has no ending even thoe it says completed :,(
 
  • #7
Great chapter can’t wait until tomorrow love your book
 
  • #8
I really enjoyed the story line. I also felt that it should have been proff read before posting. I found several misspelled words as well as a lot of grammar mistakes. Overall the story really grabbed me and took me on a nice journey. The author has a very promising future.
 
  • #9
please please author give next update reunion family please it's long request to you  it's very interesting story
 
  • #11
Really wish the author would post an update. So frustrating, especially since it was a good story up until this point.
 
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