- #1
Soo great. I really like what is translated so far. However I can not truly tell just yet how great the rest of the novel is, because at this point the plot is at an important point of change. How the author writes this change and how the plot is going to be afterwards will be the most significant factor in how good the novel will truly be. After this weak point (change of style) which has destroyed many novels I would expect no significant change in novel quality for a long time.Edit: I've read up to chapter 192 and I must say I would give this novel 3/5 stars by now.After the turning point I mentioned the quality of the novel drops.
- The author introduces game-like elements- being able to lvl up for example goblins to goblin engineers via rituals and adding other other stuff which does not fit into the setting.
- The protagonist throws his intelligence out of the window. He is still capable at researching thanks his cheats, but he often makes s*upid mistakes and needs to be saved by others, like his mentor. He kills people with strong backgrounds he wouldn't have needed to antagonize, tries to resurrect the dead and rewind time, which would have caused a dangerous backlash, but of course his mentor resolved it for him.
- For some reason everyone is willing to work with him. While he is still a wizard apprentice gods, abbys lords and other powerful existences are willing to work with him, an insignificant wizard apprentice.This doesn't make much sense.
- He is needlessly evil. Do you know Leylin from Wizard from the Magus World? He is an evil protagonist I appreciate. Lynn however may kill a hundred thousand people just to vent his emotions.
