SSS-Grade Cafe in Front of The Dungeon Chapter 43 Discussion

This novel is pretty wholesome and lighthearted.

The first 20 chapters of the novel felt pretty rushed, but once you made it past there, it becomes pretty good.

The main problem of this novel is the first 20 chapters. Because it felt so rushed, some characters are introduced blandly, the plot felt forced, the pacing got wrecked, and plot holes appeared.

Several examples can be seen here:

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In chapter 8, the MC reported the dungeon gate to the Dungeon Management Office. The report she gave is absolute bs. What kind of connection does "feeling gloomy" and "strange noises" have with dungeons? Isn't that just feeling depressed and crazy?

Also, in chapter 8, the magnetic field response is complete bs. Dungeons have appeared for 20 years now, there's no way that people haven't proved a simple theory like the magnetic field response theory.

The ingredients for the coffee in the system is different from what the original is, and the author showed that the MC also knows it. But I feel like the author should show the reasoning of how the MC came to that conclusion.

There is also the fact that the MC can't talk about the future, but the cat can. So, can't the MC just tell the cat to talk about the future for her? Of course, this is just a question, as I know that the MC is reluctant in showing that her cat can talk.

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But after that, the chapters pacing improved, and things started to get better.

One unfortunate part of this novel is that there seems to be no sufficient build-up towards the climax. Things just randomly and awkwardly pop out.

The characters are decent, the world-building is decent, and the plot is pretty wholesome and enjoyable. This is just a novel of a lazy girl who decided to open a cafe in a hunter's world. Recommended to those who want to read a hunter-gate novel that's not just all about killing monsters and leveling up.