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In a webnovel, the plot is too dumb to read. Especially since the story rolls into a monologue/diary where the protag just retells things. The characters are horribly flat, their lives are described very primitively. Add to that the inexplicable/s*upid actions of MC - when he doesn't tell Sera that he knows her friends OR when he starts wearing a mask all the time to hide his identity, but still gives his real name.The plot is very naive - for example he takes offense at the trading guild for buying potions from him cheap, but even though he poses as a merchant he never once haggled over the price.
