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Pretty good so far, nothing out of this world in terms of content, but that's to be expected a review this early sis basically meh conaidering the novel literally just took its first step.Translation wise:Its good no big grammatical errors that break immersion although the way the translator puts notes is a bit annoying.MC:Pretty generic so far, I can say the story revolves around the system rather than the MC which is always going to be him reacting to whatever quest pops out and him outsourcing it to his "disciples".Plot/world building:Can't comment here because nothing has been unveiled as of yet but the MC basically Spoiler
has the system summon a group of people to his cultivation world as 'players' and they do quests for him and regard him as npc
[collapse]Why not to read:Well there's no reason that stands out i.e misogyny r*pe racism etc but it does feel like a story thats has nothing new to offer to the table so if you are looking for something revolutionary then don't look here
