This Star Only Wants More Money Chapter 30 Discussion

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  • #1
Decent slice of life but the MC is like a robot programmed to act in certain ways during certain situations. Like if the plot doesn't require him to do something, he is emotionless and inactive and incredibly dull. There's no true personality.

But the story itself is pretty common. System does all the heavy lifting really. Without the system, the MC is nothing. And the MC is blank, useless, and nothing without the system.

Still it's not bad. This is just the standard I've come to expect out of this niche genre.
 
  • #3
Loving this book, great story line, intense characters that draw you in and literally give you a story of their own. Can't wait for more of this journey! DEFINITELY RECOMMENDED!
 
  • #4
It seems Damien kicks someone a$s)))) aaahhhh
 
  • #8
I love this book!! Keep up the good work Kehinde?❤️ I would say your writing is flawless but people make mistakes once inna while... i hope i can write like you someday?
 
  • #11
Some grammar and spelling mistakes throughout but I really enjoyed this story so far! Can't wait for the next book :)
 
  • #13
I love this story very much, but it's quite slow for me, I mean there is at least a big event to happen, but No, there is none. the story is only about their bickering, being bullied, sick, rescuing, and others are no need to mention.
 
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