- #1
The introduction of this arc starts by having MC killing the ML's mother in a car accident, and then the ML barges through the hospital to come to choke the MC to death. There's so many questionable things about this scene. First, the ML is the owner of an international company, so he obviously have a lot of money. But the MC didn't send anyone to protect his ill mother? Or at least place her in a safer place? Second, the ML barges through the hospital, but won't the nurses and doctors not stop him? This is literally a hospital where sick people are hospitalized, and a person can just rush his way through like that?
The ML obviously is described as a filial person, but how can his favorability of the MC goes from -35 to -5 in one day just by pitying the MC? Keep in mind the MC killed his mother, and the ML just finished his mother's funeral a few days after her death. It just does not make any sense.
[collapse]Everything is too rushed, everything has no details. Keep in mind the chapters are short, and I'm already finding so many plot holes.The MC also has no personality except only knowing how to complain and lie.There is nothing that motivates me to read this novel.