Quick Transmigration System: Male God, Come Here Chapter 10 Discussion

  • Thread starter Mizako
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So I am 10 chapters in and I already dislike this novel.

First, the chapters are short, so it's hard to feel any satisfaction from reading them.

Second, what the heck is the first arc?

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The introduction of this arc starts by having MC killing the ML's mother in a car accident, and then the ML barges through the hospital to come to choke the MC to death. There's so many questionable things about this scene. First, the ML is the owner of an international company, so he obviously have a lot of money. But the MC didn't send anyone to protect his ill mother? Or at least place her in a safer place? Second, the ML barges through the hospital, but won't the nurses and doctors not stop him? This is literally a hospital where sick people are hospitalized, and a person can just rush his way through like that?

The ML obviously is described as a filial person, but how can his favorability of the MC goes from -35 to -5 in one day just by pitying the MC? Keep in mind the MC killed his mother, and the ML just finished his mother's funeral a few days after her death. It just does not make any sense.

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Everything is too rushed, everything has no details. Keep in mind the chapters are short, and I'm already finding so many plot holes.

The MC also has no personality except only knowing how to complain and lie.

There is nothing that motivates me to read this novel.
 
  • #4
Excellent book. Kept me interested the entire story, I read the entire book in one sitting. However, it would have been nice to know the baby's name.
 
  • #5
don't make they meet someone new...pls ..just continue they romantic love story into daddy baby girl...pls author
 
  • #6
would prefer to read the whole book not just bits and oieces
 
  • #7
YESSSS!!! So excited to see how my girls gonna navigate all this supernatural drama! Anxious to see & read your writing growth miss ma’am;)
 
  • #9
too short and not enough of the main characters, you need to mix up so some characters aren't forgotten.  but way too short.
 
  • #10
Enough with this 'Peppa' and 'mommy pig' story! please.... David should move on asap.
 
  • #11
strong women, interesting twists, no loose ends
 
  • #12
why can't you give more than 2.5 chapters every day for this reader will never finish the book just a awful set up
 
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