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In this story, the author caters and strokes the MC excessively. The stroking I don't mind but the catering is to the point where the situation or scenario becomes a little unrealistic and dismally predictable. Many scenes containing fortunate conveniences. It's like the author has given the MC both the golden finger and perfect luck.In addition, I found 2 plot holes in this story. They're not big so it's not a major issue but still, they're there.Also, I don't know if it's the author or the english translator but I noticed the word 'exquisite' is used too frequently. Again, not a major issue, but it stands out. Overall though, the english translations are good.All in all, I don't think I really like this author all that much.So far, all the ghosts in this story are 'pg13'. Hence, the story is not scary and there is really no danger. There is also no intrigue with any of the ghosts interactions. The author doesn't do enough with each little ghost story. It's basically quickly summarized and resolved swiftly with no looking back. I noticed the author tends to use this summarization technique during the mcs' acting career too much as well. This type of writing feels lazy or amateurish; like the author doesn't know what or how to write it.This story has a strong start. It's good in the beginning but, by the time you get about halfway through, the story becomes frustrating and tiring. I am sad to say that I was only able to make it to halfway through chapter 126 before I no longer cared about the MC, ML or this story.After saying all this, I only have one question remaining... Can an author fall in love with one of his characters? It almost feels that way. But of course I could be wrong.
