- #1
The idea behind the story is great, I love it, but the implementation of it sucks.The author focuses too much on the MC's Planet (the one he created) instead of the MC's Real World. The world building just sucks, how should I say it? We don't know sh*t about the MC's Real World, but we constantly get information about the MC's Planet and characters from there (that die anyway after a few chapters). There is just too much info dump, especially when it's not really that important.Planet - planet created by mcWorld - MC's worldThe progress of MC's planet is also unnatural, illogical and completely doesn't make sense, some advanced discoveries are made before the less advanced ones (what I mean is like you know, a f*cking telescope that was discovered in 19th century, is discovered in the age of bows and spears. XD?) The story also starts weirdly, we have 4 early chapters describing how he awakens the planet, that there are schools in the real world and origin points and then boom a f*cking whole 14-20 chapters of how his planet developed, I kinda couldn't care less about it, because I wanted to know more about the real world, how it works, how fast someone's progress is (so we can kind of see the power level) and stuff like that. BUT NO, f*ck that, it just went with „who cares bruh." 24 chapters in, and I don't know if MC is progressing fast or not, does he? There's no real comparison except for the one in the early chapters at the awakening test, but later we don't really see how others are doing, until the tournament or something.Not a good story, definitely not 4.2/5 lol, I forgot and got baited by early reviews and votes sadge.
