Stuck in the Tower Chapter -- Discussion

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The novel starts off with a very interesting premise, but the background lore is ret*rded if you were supposed to take it seriously. That somehow a conspiracy of misinforming the entire world about dungeon information is possible at all, the author tried to explain this with a plot point that appears on floor 6, but it just doesn't make any sense. As long as anyone finish the 2nd floor they'll be able to access the tower community and would immediately be able to confirm that there is a conspiracy done by the guilds + government and with the difficulty of floor 3-5 which includes misinformation there's a high chance many will die and then spread the information in the real world.

Literally dog sh*t plot that's impossible to believe unless you also believe the earth is flat. It'd be more believable if they lied about the first 2 floors and try to make more people get to floor 6 to introduce the plot mechanic (which was also never explained how it works, is it magic? Alchemy? A store item? Who knows it just works).

If that's not dumb enough the story tries to build up minor characters and have them sometimes be antagonists/rivals against the protagonist, that would be kinda cool but it's instantly become ret*rded because the items these minor characters get are fraudulent if MC gets 5 items that increase his stats by 25 in total, minor character gets 1 item that increases all his stats each by 20 and the downside is that he looks like a kamen rider. If the MC gets 10 shitty skills with low ranks that he has to use the synthesis skill with ambiguous use limitations and cool down to make it usable (he just synthesize like 6 skills and then suddenly "oops, you've reached a limit you have to wait awhile until you can use it again, how long? Who knows teehee"), the minor character gets 5 incredibly strong skills that boss monsters have that is perfect for their build/personality. The MC wins a plot device ticket that can summon S rank NPC to help him + B rank skill book, minor character wins elixir that increases each of his stats by +20.

It's just so dog sh*t the more I read it, the author clearly does not have the ability to decently write multiple storylines but he tries to anyways and makes everything incoherent and dogshit

1/5 it's alright if you turn your brain off
 
  • #3
Wonderful story! I have enjoyed this one very much. Thank you for sharing your precious talents. All the best in your future endeavors!
 
  • #4
This book is awesome and I have never read anything like it. It got me glued with suspense to the very last chapter and a strong female lead character who is determined to conquer despite all adversities set before her and the mixture of thriller, Action and Romance in a Dance Novel is great.
 
  • #5
one year ,365 days and Gabriel had been screwing behind her back. Using a bottle was even nice ,she should have thrown a fridge at him.
 
  • #7
Absolutely magnificent story! definitely looking forward to anything that follows this universe, but most keen on knowing the progress of the gods, how Lizzy and allessia are doing and what happens with the newly discovered were-creatures! Show me a were-falcon!! :)  Thanks for an amazing read!
 
  • #11
Earlier we could read more than 4 chapters a day but now author is releasing only 1 chapter a day. Losing the interest in d story.
 
  • #12
Get an editor and use appropriate grammar. Sounds like it was written by a 12 year old.
 
  • #13
This has been updated for a while it’s irritating I have read the story so far and it isn’t completed or updated
 
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